elmo1010,
Yeah, it is short, and it isn't exactly "gripping", but it definately doesn't deserve a zero. It was stylish in the way that it was presented, and it was original.
Quality, not quantity!
elmo1010,
Yeah, it is short, and it isn't exactly "gripping", but it definately doesn't deserve a zero. It was stylish in the way that it was presented, and it was original.
Quality, not quantity!
Congratulations.
Haha, very, very good.
And good luck to you and your wife!
Pretty good, but...
The music didn't fit in at all. It wasn't in time, and you could've chosen a livelier song.
'Part from that good submission, and keep it up! xD
Good sense of humour
I like this flash, but I'm not sure if others will...
Maybe you could work on your timing when the jokes come in, and maybe put boxes around the text, to make it easier to read.
You've already got the length fine, just work on some of the bits here and there.
Just a little bit of constructive criticism for you xD
This flash has potential and I'd love to see a new, better, more `Advanced` Part 2.
Anyway, well done!
(Loved the music!)
Wha...?
I thought it was gonna be all serious and stuff, wrong.
Strange, Definatly original, ill give it a 4.
XD
Good...
A bit jerky/sticky but good.
Cool
Good Idea, animation was good, lightsabre effect was good, 1 thing - Is the camera supposed to zoom in on the L-Sabre on the ground or does it float? That is all, I think.
Keep workin' on that idea, and it'll be a hit. =) Good Stuff Dude =)
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