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Whistle Status: Normal
Exp. Points: 400 / 550
Exp. Rank #: 97,371
Voting Pow.: 4.82 votes
BBS Posts: 290 (0.17 per day)
Flash Reviews: 11
Music Reviews: 1
Trophies: 0
Stickers: 0
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11 Reviews | 1 w/ Response
Yeah, it is short, and it isn't exactly "gripping", but it definately doesn't deserve a zero. It was stylish in the way that it was presented, and it was original.
Quality, not quantity!
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Haha, very, very good.
And good luck to you and your wife!
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Maybe a new mic/try to stay at the same distance - you should be able to clench your fist and fit it between your mouth and mic, but that depends on the mic itself to be honest - And I'm guessing you were moving back and forward between the mic, since the sound gets quieter then louder, then quieter again.
Maybe work on your storyline, and spend more time on the animation. I realise you said this was not your best, but you can still learn from it.
I really don't think this should be blammed, but at least if it does, your next should be better from some constructive comments.
xD
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review, the sound quality is crap so thanks for the tip.
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Holy Crap, you guys have totally taken over the Internet. I mean seriously, Newgrounds???
It's completely unrelated to your videos!
But I like your videos, so, WhoopWhoop xD
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The music didn't fit in at all. It wasn't in time, and you could've chosen a livelier song.
'Part from that good submission, and keep it up! xD
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I like this flash, but I'm not sure if others will...
Maybe you could work on your timing when the jokes come in, and maybe put boxes around the text, to make it easier to read.
You've already got the length fine, just work on some of the bits here and there.
Just a little bit of constructive criticism for you xD
This flash has potential and I'd love to see a new, better, more `Advanced` Part 2.
Anyway, well done!
(Loved the music!)
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A bit too short, I was kinda shocked when it finished.
I was stuck on the dragon part for about 20 minutes, aaaarrrggh.
Good game, grea interactivity.
PS - Did you mean the quality bar to be the three "Blink 182 - Take Off Your Pants and Jacket" album colours? XP
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I thought it was gonna be all serious and stuff, wrong.
Strange, Definatly original, ill give it a 4.
XD
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A bit jerky/sticky but good.
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Good idea...
Different...
Yeah...
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